Monday, April 27, 2009

Chapter 3 - Juchai's Roots

Chapter 3 - Juchai's Roots


Darte shivered as he stepped out into the cool, damp morning, letting the tent-flap fall closed behind him. The spidery clouds spread over the skies told him another wet day was likely ahead. The climate here was not what he had expected: when it wasn't raining, which was very rarely, the air itself still felt warm and sticky. Even the massive trees constantly let fat droplets fall on unsuspecting heads, as if they had drunk their fill and were now overflowing. Not even the tents were safe from leaks; they hadn't been made for this much water, and the best one could do was keep your bedding above the ground, and hope the patches held.

He strode, yawning, to one of the campfires lit nearby. The wet wood billowed vast streams of thick smoke, but the shivering cadets surrounding it didn't seem to be concerned about choking. One of the cadets spotted Darte, and, after a series of rapid whispers, one of the cadets jumped up from the huddled circle and ran up him. The cadet could not have been more than 15 or 16 years of age: he could not yet have seen his Fledging Day, though the tight bandages around his back told Darte that it would arrive soon. The boy eyed Darte's green-fringed shriveled wings for a brief moment before bending to the ground in a formal Tur'nasi kneel.

Darte blinked as if startled for a moment, running his hand through lanky brown hair. What was it he needed...? Glancing down, he realized the cadet was still kneeling. Some cadets gave far too much respect, but he could not expect them to know without experience. He beckoned him to stand, which he did, snapping to attention. "Lance-General, Sir! Cadet Brynik reporting, Sir, is there anything you need, Sir?" The cadet's half-hearted shouts couldn't have woken anyone within two wingspans, and Darte could barely contain his inward chuckles. This one was obviously the son of a Council member, whose parents hoped he would have a future in the Alliance forces. He managed to keep a straight face, however. "Yes, yes, Cadet, half a moment." What was it? Ah, yes. "Cadet Brynik, could you see to Pike-Marshals Lubris and Rynsor, and tell them to get the troops ready to search farther to the south? And let them know I want to see them this morning, before they set out."

"Yes, Sir, right away, Sir!" The cadet followed the half-hearted reply with another extended kneel before running off across the camp to find the officers. Darte did chuckle, now. The army probably wasted whole days waiting for young cadets to finish paying respects before carrying out orders; such was the cost of training.

Back in his tent, Darte shuffled around various charts and notes on his small, but portable table. The mess looked somewhat more organized by the time Rynsor made it to the tent ten minutes later. For a middle-aged member of the Chamber of Hawks, Rynsor's dusty-brown hair was already greying around the temples, with a hairline that looked like it was slipping off his scalp. Lubris entered a minute later, grinning as always. He too, was a Hawk, with wings a deeper brown than most, and long enough to clip the top of the tent as he closed the flap. "I'd hoped to eat some more of that runny gruel Weskan prepared, but I guess I'll have to save it 'til we call halt. So, what's today's plan?"

Rynsor gave a mildly disapproving glance at Lubris' joking before echoing his curiosity. "Yes, I was wondering if the young cadet still had frozen brains; he said you planned on moving further south. You know we can't move south any more, seeing as we're already at the roots of the Juchai Range."

Darte didn't look up from organizing for a couple moments, then turned with a slightly smug look on his face. "Come here, I want to show you something." The two stepped forward to look at the charts. The simple maps had been covered with ink blots, notes taken and removed, changed beyond recognition, as often as not. Rynsor mumbled something about untidy behavior, and Lubris snickered quietly. Darte ignored the two, pointing instead at the end of a deep-red line. "This, Marshals, is where we are. And here..." He slid his finger rapidly down the map two full squares. "...here is where the roots start. We have a full days worth of marching left until we need to turn back. We've already covered most of the territory; there can't be many places left to look. It shouldn't be too hard to identify some old ruins."

Lubris nodded slowly, pointing to a small hatch-mark on the chart. "This is where we expected to find it, right? We've already searched through a circle at least ten greens wide, and we can't look much further without wasting time. If it's not there, it won't just appear through some mysterious magick." Rynsor, too, nodded. "The only alternative is if we didn't recognize the ruins for what they were, impossible as it may seem. Much can happen in several thousand years. Either way, we don't dare to move too close to the mountains. You know the Ka-"

Rynsor cut short as a young Swords-Sergeant pushed open the tent-flaps, giving a brief Tur'nasi kneel before standing. "The scouting parties are prepared, Marshals. We await your orders." Darte nodded quickly, wiping all the parchments into a jumbled pile inside his chest. "You heard the lad, Lubris, Rynsor. Pack up the tents, we move south!" The two nodded and dashed out the tent behind the Sergeant. There could not be much left to search. He would show the Emperor he could serve better than that big-headed General Poraeus. The ruins would be his to discover, and his alone.

Saturday, April 11, 2009

Chapter 2 - Simmering

Chapter 2 - Simmering

Poraeus stepped out from the shaded columns of the Council, barely stopping to glare at the two plated, guan dao-wielding1 Kairn guards posted outside the entryway. A black-haired Humari with mottled grey wings fell in beside him as he entered the white-graveled thoroughfare. Though a full head shorter than Poraeus, the general's companion's wings stretched much higher, making him seem to loom. After one glance at the general's crimson face, he did not need words to know what had happened in the hearing. They reached half-way across the plaza before Poraeus opened his mouth to snap at his companion. "What do you say about your great plan, now, Trake? Rejected, like the others before it. I spent months on it, and they still threw it out! You're supposed to be the most esteemed advisor in the Chamber of Owls. Tell me, were your wings rubbed in ash on your Fledging Day, or did they come out that colour?"

Trake arched his back slightly, though not enough for Poraeus to see. There was no reasoning with him, and it was better he blow off steam with poison words than with iron-clad fists. Best to remain silent. Poraeus continued ranting. "The Kairn are a deadly threat to the Humari Alliance, and they choose to ignore it. Just wait: they'll make an attack soon. They may have strength in numbers, but..."


Trake nodded vacantly, ignoring the growling chatter. He'd keep talking until he was blustering and out of breath. The two were now walking through the grimy alleys; stone and mortar sat next to half-rotted wood structures, more often than not. Muffled noises of noisy haggling and busy common rooms filtered in through the cracks and open windows, half-drowning Poraeus' grumbling. Once or twice, Trake had to pull his wings down to avoid clipping them on overhanging beams and window-panes.

"Trake! Do you need to clean out your ears? I asked you if you've any news from the Exchange yet."

Trake blinked, realizing he'd completely missed his companion's question. Frowning absently, he began rubbing his chin, despite the obvious lack of stubble. "I've not heard anything, but I haven't stopped by in the past several days: planning, you know, for the hearing..." His voice faded as Poraeus pivoted on one heel to grip Trake's arm. Trake winced as his wrist was squeezed in the general's powerful grip. So much for just poison words.

"Check... it... now." The general ground out each word with grit teeth, punctuating every syllable with a painful squeeze of Trake's arm. Trake quickly nodded, trying to pull back. "Of course, I'll do it, as always. I will report to you tonight, if you're not busy?"

Poraeus considered the statement for a moment, then nodded, releasing the vice, leaving Trake to chafe his wrist gingerly. "I'm in need of good news; if I don't get some, soon... your body would make a fine example for the Council of the Kairn's brutality, don't you think?" Flames seemed to flicker behind those blue eyes. Whether madness or anger, Trake did not want to find out. He nodded, licking his suddenly dry lips, and turned towards the alley entrance, concentrating on not running.

The Raven Exchange was on the other side of the Melero River, at least two-hundred wingspans away. At least he'd have more time to think. Poraeus was an incredible general, and a powerful man, but his method of leadership was unorthodox, to say the least. He relied on threats and anger to do what other generals accomplished with a single, impartial order. And yet the Emperor favoured him, perhaps because of this stand he was taking against the Kairn. Trake sighed: if there was another man he could attach himself to more powerful than Lance-General Poraeus, besides the Emperor himself, then he wasn't born Trachendre Firlocke.

Through the maze of alleys, following a path only few knew. Trake knew he had navigated correctly when he spotted the old hide-covered cart, axle shattered and wheels nowhere to be seen. Looking furtively to ensure he wasn't seen, Trake casually walked to the cart, leaning against it. His hands, however, moved behind him, to lift up the fabric, and in moments, he had rolled himself into the cart. Or what looked to be the cart from the outside; inside, you could see the wall behind the cart. A corbel arch2 was inset with a solid door, with no apparent handle. The arch itself had a detailed painting of what appeared to be a raven on its keystone3, wings outspread and beak holding a jewel-crested amulet. Trake grinned and touched the amulet. There was a green flash under his finger, a momentary tone, as if someone had sung a brief, pure note. He had always found this Artefact fascinating; the sheer simplicity of it belied its complex design. The door swung open to reveal a cramped storefront, lit only by two flickering torches pegged to the wall. The Raven Exchange was open for business.



Glossary-
1Guan dao: A pole arm used in martial arts, consisting of a blade with a rear hook mounted atop a five to six foot pole. Picture Wikipedia
2Corbel arch: An arch made not by curving stones smoothly together, but rather with blocks coming in from either side until they meet at the apex. Wikipedia
3Keystone: The stone at the apex (peak) of an arch. Wikipedia